tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post9148245543457473382..comments2009-03-04T02:43:36.576+01:00Lizzyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10337781550329469933noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-81946298491247342472009-03-04T02:43:00.000+01:002009-03-04T02:43:00.000+01:00I love this story! I can't wait until you post the next part.ashgirl195http://www.blogger.com/profile/07508945615971055123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-61823756853584168842008-10-28T12:46:00.000+01:002008-10-28T12:46:00.000+01:00Well, I finally made it here!!!<BR/>Took me long enough didn't it?<BR/><BR/>Again I found this to be a captivating story. Even this far after reading it the first time.<BR/><BR/>It just leaves you with questions begging answers.<BR/><BR/>I hope someday you decide to answer them.chardonnayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09413200629714468681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-59754357250826899782008-01-23T22:09:00.000+01:002008-01-23T22:09:00.000+01:00The plot thickens...this story is getting more interesting and your pictures are very artistic. I love that it is so mysterious, and can't wait to read more.Astral Faeryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04473631993621892097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-2242204128815838352008-01-11T06:53:00.000+01:002008-01-11T06:53:00.000+01:00Dear Lizzy, I loved it! Fantastic pictures, all of them! Your writing is marvelous! You are a very talented young lady! Congratulations! :rah: Can't wait for the next chapter! :)ZAYURYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16572720563126131962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-39751213304716053342007-10-24T21:04:00.000+02:002007-10-24T21:04:00.000+02:00Hello Lizzy<BR/><BR/>Another great part you did here =) *huggles* *is soooo proud of BIG sister*<BR/><BR/>Poor Lisanna ... already feeling sad going to work...<BR/><BR/>...is there nobody at "home" to cheer her up?<BR/><BR/>It really is not easy being in her situation and having to answer so many questions that anybody just asks without thinking much - just to get to know the other person a little better<BR/><BR/>Ah, well, poor Lisanna should tell her that she does not want to talk about that and/or should ask counter-questions =D<BR/><BR/>And no, she cannot see that, she has to tell her.<BR/><BR/>You did a great job illustrating the story =)<BR/><BR/>The questions I got from the story:<BR/>- What happened between Emma and Lisanna?<BR/>- Whst happened between Lisanna and Ariel, that she cannot believe it is her, that she cannot believe she is back?<BR/>- Where was she? And why did she leave the rest?<BR/>- And what is with the war?<BR/>- Why did Lisanna not tell Jane that she does not want to talk, or that she does not want to talk about that?<BR/>- What caused their deaths?<BR/>- Whose fault was it?<BR/><BR/>I know, lots of questions. And I guess most will be answered later on in the story.<BR/><BR/>You again did a great job.<BR/><BR/><BR/>mjkjmjkjhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18012300941821215658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-90065399538571364442007-10-13T12:57:00.000+02:002007-10-13T12:57:00.000+02:00To Gayl:<BR/>Thank you! I try to make everything the very best I can do, even though it sometimes drives me crazy that I am like that.<BR/><BR/>Really? What was that tv show called?<BR/><BR/>To Pablo: <BR/>Thanks!<BR/>My mom said that that picture is probably the best one of this chapter.<BR/><BR/>I think so...<BR/><BR/>No, I'm not forgetting about White Death, I am just making new filmsets.<BR/>I already made a few minutes of episode 2, and I'll film more soon.<BR/><BR/>To Sandra:<BR/>Thank you, I try to make my story different from what others have written before me.<BR/><BR/>Yes, tha whole war thing... what <I>is</I> going on?<BR/><BR/>Who knows? Well, I do a little, but not yet every little detail...<BR/><BR/>I hope so too, but one big problem that I had is already solved; the many, many lots I had to build for the neighbourhood.<BR/><BR/>Thanks!<BR/><BR/>To Mom (Leah):<BR/>Thank you, mommy.<BR/>My Jane is boring, but that is what makes Jane <I>my</I> Jane.<BR/>Jane is really doing her best to make friends and all, but I think she lacks social skills... and charisma.Lizzyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10337781550329469933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-86904079795249517322007-10-13T11:27:00.000+02:002007-10-13T11:27:00.000+02:00Loved that!<BR/>I've seen you struggling with this chapter, but believe me, it was all worth it.<BR/>And that 'confused' picture (26) - it's brilliant. Probably the best of all.<BR/>I like your Jane Doe - she's so different from mine. Yours is serious - boring even; and it fits her so well.<BR/>I think I've actually known people like her; they get on my nerves =PLeahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09039203051170811813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-29608292688040863972007-10-13T06:24:00.000+02:002007-10-13T06:24:00.000+02:00:D finally made it here!! lol sorry, it took me longer than expected. <BR/><BR/>you're story is so unique, and you have me thinking about Jane Doe and the war she mentioned... <BR/><BR/>now I'm wondering if Lisanna was transported to another dimension, maybe she didn't die, could it be? lol<BR/><BR/>Looking forward to your next chapter, hopefully it wont take as long. <BR/><BR/>Your pictures are really nice, i loved of Lisanna in the darkness, and the one with the letter was kind of creepy :d lol, really cool!<BR/><BR/>Great job!sandybvvhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13184116176898469340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-58387144425310105362007-10-13T03:47:00.000+02:002007-10-13T03:47:00.000+02:00I loved yoru screenies of her being triplicate and all dark and angsty and also about the whole text saying her emotions within the picture, its very expressive. <BR/><BR/>Very good, keep up the good work, and as a quick note, I wonder why Gail thinks of dead people when reading this? maybe because of the very small prologue I guess. <BR/><BR/>Hope you are not forgeting of white death, it was a lovely movie, and the girl is quite interesting.scarlet_whitehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17743810440703736861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5856089026022475437.post-14652704110305056752007-10-12T17:57:00.000+02:002007-10-12T17:57:00.000+02:00Great update Lizzy. As always your pictures are wonderful. I can see you put a great deal of thought into your stories when you write.<BR/><BR/>It's funny...your story reminds me so much of a tv show I used to watch about dead people who rescued souls. I loved that show!<BR/><BR/>Keep up the good work!Gaylhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09476656359810192923noreply@blogger.com