Comments on Estranged: Estranged - Prologue; do you like mornings?

Very mysterious, and a fascinating storyline. It ...

2008-01-23T21:56:00.000+01:00

Very mysterious, and a fascinating storyline. It does have a surreal quality to it, and it will be interesting to see what happens next. I, too, am curious about what happened to them to bring them all there; how they died. Your screenshots are lovely, too. Well done.

Wow! Lizzy, this beginning is awesome! Your chara...

2008-01-11T06:39:00.000+01:00

Wow! Lizzy, this beginning is awesome! Your characters are beautiful, the writing excellent, and the pictures sharp and clear! I'm very intrigued! :)

Ooh I like it! The intro is intriguing! Very nice ...

2007-09-02T22:57:00.000+02:00

Ooh I like it! The intro is intriguing! Very nice screenshots as well. I'm looking forward to seeing how this one pans out. Keep up the good work :)

-Silvery

very interesting, cant wait to see whats next, you...

2007-08-25T01:31:00.000+02:00

very interesting, cant wait to see whats next, you did a wonderful job, your pictures are great, and your writing even better.

The story line is one of kind, you have chose a perfect theme for your first story everybody is waiting to read more.

Im also wondering how they died.

love it... no wonder your mom is so proud of you!! great job!!

I can't wait to see how they died also. Cute star...

2007-08-23T16:15:00.000+02:00

I can't wait to see how they died also. Cute start.

Very intriguing story Lizzy. I am fascinated by th...

2007-08-21T17:52:00.000+02:00

Very intriguing story Lizzy. I am fascinated by the storyline. Can't wait to read more.

Your screenshots are very well set up and portray the story quite well.

I love it. I am really curious as to what is going...

2007-08-21T00:10:00.000+02:00

I love it. I am really curious as to what is going on, where are they and what's happening.

Fantastic narrative hook!

Wow too me like 3 minutes to read it, the photogra...

2007-08-20T23:51:00.000+02:00

Wow too me like 3 minutes to read it, the photography is fantastic and I hope to hear more of you, it was quite intriguing the reference of being in another body, I wonder if that was a metaphor or a plot thing that is going to be quite strange and maybe very cool

Excellent Job! The others are right, that is a ver...

2007-08-20T21:24:00.000+02:00

Excellent Job! The others are right, that is a very profound question to start a story with. And it makes many more come to mind, but at this point, I shall withhold them to see what you do next.

You did an incredible job with the screenshots. They are almost telling the story themselves. And that is a very good thing.

I can just imagine the confusion and surreality that would happen to you if you did wake up and find you were someone else.

I am glad your mom is making this a school project. It will really showcase your talent.

And I can see why she is so proud of you!!!!!!

You are very welcome big sister :)Well, of course ...

2007-08-20T21:20:00.000+02:00

You are very welcome big sister :)

Well, of course they are different :) you used only your friends and yourself as base and then they develop a live of their own *grins*

No, I did not think she always had her hair like that - I just said I do not like it like that - that is all (and she does not look as nice as she would otherwise...)

And yeah, those eyes really are very beautiful... *dreams*

Ah, well, we all do not know at what time she really started - and she did a lot of thinking then...

Hehehe, well, I do not know if I really would dream off when I hear a birdy voice like that - never heard one yet...

Yeah, it is the knowing factor... :)

And also you really can see that she cares - but either does not know she does - or does not want to admit it =P

Oh, you are welcome again, Imoto-chan *huggles*

mjkj

To Simul8ed:Thank you, thank you!It makes me happy...

2007-08-20T21:07:00.000+02:00

To Simul8ed:
Thank you, thank you!
It makes me happy that other people who can write sooo well like my story!
I am already writing the first chapter, I have to upload it within a month.

To Leah (Mom):
Thanks mommy, I am glad I made you proud of me!
And I will live up to my promise - wait, which promise again?
*has forgotten which one*
Love you too.

To Arry:
Thank you, I will update within a month, mostly because this is my 'school' project for English.
And, Arry, are you gonna write a sim story too?

To Beth:
Thank you!
As I said above, the next chapter will come soon.

To Mjkj:
Aww, thank you, little brother!

Well, even though I based Emma and Lisanna on Essy and me, they are different.
And about how Dina looks; do you think she'll have her hair like that all the time?

Those beautiful eyes are very pretty, I love them too!
When I wake up I am too tired to eat most of the time.
Also, I personally HATE getting wet in the morning, even if it is warm water in a bathtub.
Plus cold water helps me wake up better than warm.

I didn't take very long, it was Lisanna who did.
But if I were her I would have taken as long as she did.

Yes, awwwwww, birdy-voice!
But I can't imagine dreaming off when I hear a voice like that...
Then again, I'm not you.

The truth is, when you have known someone for years you know when they sound tired, even if others, who don't know you as well, don't.
Yes, Emma does care, though maybe she doesn't know that consiously.

Dina says no to fight! :o

Thank you again!

Hello LizzyI am soo proud of you, big sister *hugg...

2007-08-20T20:27:00.000+02:00

Hello Lizzy

I am soo proud of you, big sister *huggles*

You made a really great story with really nice sims for it. I really like your Lisanna-Sim and also Essy's Emma-Sim. Dina also looks nice, but I think she would look better with open hair than with that braid (or however that is called)

Nice introduction. It is really great - especially starting with a profound question like that. I really like to know also how you and your friends died and also how this happened, who is behind this and why.

Well, mornings can be beautiful... But I am usually more a sleep in type. And looking like that, I think you look very pretty and beautiful :)
Also very beautiful eyes you have there =D

Awww, it is not nice to be too tired to even eat - well I usually get a shower first and then the nice and warm water wakes me up a bit more... - ...and I am sure a nice bubble-bath would do the same :)

Woah, it seems you did take that long (though I do not know when you started...)

Aww, birdy-voice :) *grins* nice and carefree just the thing you need to wake up =D

Yeah, I can imaging dreaming off hearing a voice like that...

(You really write and describe things vividly - very good)

Ohh, you really must sound tired if even Emma seems to recognize it :)

And it seems that Emma does care about you - she just does not want to show it :) (at least publically)

Dina seems to be the right person to settle a budding fight

Again, congratulations, it is very, very good - (and I am also very, very proud of you) *huggles*

mjkj

Fantastic screenshots, and carefully crafted, wond...

2007-08-20T17:46:00.000+02:00

Fantastic screenshots, and carefully crafted, wonderfully restrained writing. I love the subway tile on the wall in the kitchen; the touch about the hairbrush, and characterization.

Beautiful job! Can't wait for the rest of it.

I think it's a really good story! The screenshots ...

2007-08-20T17:06:00.000+02:00

I think it's a really good story! The screenshots too! I really hope you'll update more soon!
Arry

I love your story, love your screenshots, and I'm ...

2007-08-20T16:15:00.000+02:00

I love your story, love your screenshots, and I'm so happy to have you join the club.
You really deserve it; you have proved to be both a talented writer and photographer.
You'd better make sure that you live up to your promise now, my dear.
Alright, I'm biased - it's a mother's right.
Love you always.

That was very well written and the screenshots are...

2007-08-20T15:46:00.000+02:00

That was very well written and the screenshots are beautiful. It is no wonder your mom is so proud of you.

As for the story itself and your concept. You left me very intrigued. How did this poor girl and her friends die in the first place, and what happened to bring them back to life. For that matter what happened to the girl whose body she now possesses.

I truly can not wait for more.